Evelyn's+Personal+Narrative

=Narritive #1=

One shining day it was my birthday. Before my birthday I was to exited to go to sleep! Well when it was the big day we paced all the stuff we needed to go there.When my cousins, ants and uncals got on the vans we all were exited. Fineley we were at disney land.When we got there we went to all the rides.The next day we woke up, ate, went on some rides.Some of the rides that we went to are, Splash Mountin,space Mountin,Whinnie the pooh (Hey if you think that was sill it was my 4b-day.Well that is all for today sea!

=Narritive #2= When it was my birthday I was exited! The next day it was my birthday. when we got to the park,we set every thing up.We invited 200 people and they all came.After we set up every we ate chichen. In a little while we broke two penatas. When that was over it